One day Maui got very, very frustrated because the sun went far too fast and he never got time to do anything. He called a family meeting and told his brothers the problem that he was determined to solve. Finally they agreed that they would make flax ropes and catch the sun.
When they had finished they went to search for the hole where the sun comes out. It took a while but finally they found it. When the sun came out Maui yelled, "Pull pull!!!" So Maui's brothers pulled and pulled and as for Maui he started to beat up the sun!! All the sun said was, "Stop, stop you will kill me! Can't you see I'm nearly dead?" "Let him go" said Maui. Now he won't go so fast.
Maui and his brothers now had more time to do anything they wanted. And as for the sun he went more slowly in the sky because he was in terrible pain. THE END!!! by Kate

I love your story and kidpix!! Keep up the awesome work! Bryan :)
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