Monday, 4 August 2014

Diving at a Beach by Jack

One day I went to a beach. It was so sandy and crunchy. I dived into the water. It was freezing!  Then I saw a fish . I didn't know what type it was. After that I made a sand castle. It was humungous! Lastly we played a game of tag. I never got tagged. It was an awesome day!! By Jack






































1 comment:

  1. Humungous!!!! What a great WOW word!
    You have written a fab story.
    Keep it up.
    :)Bryan

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